Section1 Guided Writing

　　Getting Along with Others

　　寫作任務:

　　在日常生活中,我們每天都要與人打交道,而說到與人打交道,我們更多想到的是如何處理好與同學、老師以及朋友的關系,而往往忽略了與我們每天都要面對的、最親近的父母之間的關系。不少同學以"代溝"為借口,拒絕與父母交流溝通。你怎樣看待這個現象？說說你的看法以及你與父母融洽相處的小秘訣。

　　分析:

　　1. 寫作任務要求大家根據某一話題發表自己的看法,根據所給題目,我們可以提煉的信息是,該習作要求對一種社會現象進行分析,然后給出自己的見解。寫作任務部分已經對這種現象進行了描述,因而寫作重點是你對該現象的看法。我們可以從自己的日常生活中總結經驗,提出自己的觀點:多和父母交流才能促進理解,進而融洽相處。

　　2. 確立寫作重點之后,就要考慮文章的結構。該習作可以分三部分來完成:首先,簡要描述當前同學們在與父母相處過程中遇到的問題；其次,就這些問題闡明你的觀點,論述時要注意條理性和邏輯性；最后,再次強調一下文章的主題思想,突出中心。

　　3. 注意語言的流暢性和上下文之間的連貫性。

　　初稿:

　　How to Get Along with Your Parents

　　Nowadays, many teenagers are having problems getting along with parents. Some quarrel with their parents from time to time. Some even have negative attitude to-wards their parents. Nobody wants to have problems with his or her parents.

　　First, I think because of the age gap different generations may have different points of view. And we should try to talk with parents more. Second, I think we kids should trust our parents and turn to them when we are in trouble, because they are more experienced and they may help us out. Third, we kids should think more about our parents' lives. Our parents have much pressure on them from society and they're very busy. Sometimes they may scold us and may not have the patience to listen to us, but we all know our parents love us.

　　Finally, I want to emphasize that communication is the best solution for getting along with others, including the most intimate people --our parents.

　　教師點評:

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